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Hello Deviantart community 

Hey everybody, this is Palmetto 720. Im clearly working on typing up a series that have been working on for 7 years, all the scripts are done, all that is needed now is to type them 

Title of Story: Legend Of A Zaterrian Hero 

Genre: Shonen, Action, Adventure, Homor, Tragedy 

Synopsis: 
Two months before the start of the series, two people had arrived at a well known planet, bent on destroying it in order to obtain the five keys of the universe. In order to protect the keys, as well as his family, a lone member of the Royal Family had decided to sacrifice his life in order to preserve the balance. Although he had placed a valiant fight, it was ultimately in vain as the planet was destroyed, and the keys shattered. As a result, the royal family was nearly extinct. It's only surviving member is Alexander, an adolescent teenage boy who was next to hold the Royal Throne, unaware of his planet's destruction. A tradition that has been carried since the beginning of time itself. Now held captive by the assiliants, he seeks to make his way out of this prison in order to find the truth of what happened to the planet, Zaterria. As he goes forth on his journey, he makes various allies and enemies. Will the truth be too hard to bear. 

Previously i had worked with an artist before, however, he had never communicated with me and as a result, i had missed many promotional oppourtunies, such as Yenpress and Dark Horse, as he would never communicate with me or the editor, and he would often refuse to make corrections to the chapters, often displaying them inaccurately. I even offered to pay him. However, he had ultimately quit after me, the editor, and the temporary artist had told him to correct the mistakes he had done with the boxes. as a result, i had to force myself on hiatus, as i was at 30 chapters in august, while he was at Three chapters. and this all started back a year ago. 

this is a free/Paid Comission 

What I mean by that is that For Every Chapter you create and post on Taptastic (provided that you have a paypal account) the views submitted from that chapter will be translated into money, from there. you will get all the money gained from the support program. I will try to get the 500 subscribers. All of the money will go towards the artist, for four years. By the time I graduate from college, with a Bachelors Degree in Graphic Design & Illustration (Concentration in Animation), i'll then start paying you more often as ill be working in a company. I hope that by doing this, that we have an everlasting partnership, one that doesn't deteriorate due to greed. 

Note: Storyboards wont be included until the spring as ill be taking Storyboarding and Animation classes 

If anybody is interested, please comment. Also, please tell me where did i go wrong. i feel like i did something wrong here. 

and heres an example of the script. 

Page 1 
[Main box] [Somewhere in an unknown location] 
(First panel shows what appears to be a hallway with several jail cells) 
(Second panel shows a close up of one of the cells, particularly cell block c) 
(Third panel shows alexander sitting down) 
(Scene shows alexander looking around the cell) 

Page 2 
(Scene shows a guard opening the cell door where alexander is residing at) 
Guard: good, you’re awake, now move it. Get out of this cell at once. 
(Scene shows alexander moving out of the cell) 
Alexander: what’s the meaning of this, why am I…? 
(Scene shows the guard hitting alexander with a Taser) 
Guard: you are in no position to be asking me a question, now move it! 

Page 3 
(Scene shows the guard placing the taser back inside a pocket) 
(Scene shows Alexander slightly burnt) 
(Scene shows Alexander following the guard, clearly upset) 
(Scene shows them walking through the hallway with several cells) 

i can also do backgrounds, still praticing 

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