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RareFlaw's avatar
Heyo!, I'm here for task seven.

first of all your drawing and penciling is advanced,your shading and details are great and I don't see too much more that would need brushing up. One thing I'd like to suggest to you is to darken your shading more and possibly highlight lighter areas more as it will really make him stand out in any art piece. You definitely have good choices of colour and I think it would be good to play around  a wee bit and see what using a bit less colour does.

another thing to know is it depends on what type of art a person does, while cartoons may not require shading or much colour, more realistic takes allot of work and time which you are using very well! And I applaud your works for they must need allot of patience from you as the artist.  

one last little comment id like to add is making comics just like realistic drawings also take so longer and that's great your doing this, most people I see (including me) usually has trouble making detailed pages and even attempting a comic can be very hard. Thank you as a fellow participant in oc training and I know you'll be even better skilled artist pretty quick!.
charcoalfeather's avatar
Thanks so much for the awesome comment and feedback! I think increasing shading works for certain styles that are meant to be more dramatic or scenes/lighting that are more dramatic, but lately, I've been moving towards more subtle shading due to being sort of captivated by really light watercolour-wash styles I've seen. But yes, generally speaking, it is definitely a good choice to try new things!

Thank you so much! Yeah, comics do take up a lot of time and sometimes you even want to give up when you don't have enough energy/time to get it going. But it's definitely worth it!