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I usually don't read anything other than books but for some reason your writing drew me in. I especially liked the end: Then I see you.
I have flown the distance of eternity and spent an aeon searching.
No depth, no height, no beauty in between can compare.
How is there another?
But you.
I'm a sappy romantic person and its nice to hear or read rather from time to time that people can still feel to that depth (if not feel then at least the ability to empathize to that level)
The overall flow of it worked well like the waves on a shore, I could have done with out the: Nothing is new under the sun. I felt it disrupted the poem like it just dropped into a statement and gave up like this time is the end but it keeps going maybe that helps it but I skipped over those part but that's just me and my preference XD
It was very well done and refreshing I thoroughly enjoyed reading it